Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
×

More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
January 15, 2010
File Size
577 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
118
Favourites
3 (who?)
Comments
4
×
Sinking in the sky
trying to see your eyes
you're gone and still alive
you're in the limbo of my life

I'll have to sacrifice
the last breathe in my mind
force your memory to die
and stop the burden in my soul

The comfort I once had
turns out to be a lie
I've never been
you've never seen me

Fly away!
the winter has come
to never leave again
it's time to reborn...

Bring the ashes to life!
...:noir:...
Add a Comment:
 
:iconjavu-inksig:
Javu-Inksig Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2010
una duda y un comentario como pones sólo textos en DA?
comentario:
me gusto mucho el continuo flujo de palabras a un punto y el final encajó perfecto :]
Reply
:iconalkhumeia:
Alkhumeia Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
muchas gracias Javu's! :D

pues igual q cuando subes una imagen solo q en vez de cargar el archivo dice "add text" ahi le puchurras y listo! a escribir mi chavo
hey! porque no subes tu dibujo de todos nacemos unicos, es realmente bueno haha cada q voy a tu casa me le quedo viendo :XD:
Reply
:iconmikeangelomex:
MikeAngeloMex Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome o.O, geniales palabras, ^^ pero hay un detalle en la penúltima linea -i'ts-, fuera de eso esta bastante emotivo, good work!:D
Reply
:iconalkhumeia:
Alkhumeia Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
done
Reply
Add a Comment: